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Raisrviln
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Fallen Proof "Cancelled"

Postby Raisrviln » Sun Dec 13, 2009 4:23 am

Sadly i am canceling this game, i have had to many complications with my computer and have wiped everything off accept two important things
i have kept my resources i decided just to make resources. and will not be making a game anymore.

"Cancelled"



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Progress:
Game Completion
|>>>>>>>>>>| 4%
Story Completion: 0%
Map Completion: 12%
Resource Completion: 28%
Character construction: 7%

Plot:
The story will be completed February 18th 2010, A true good story i am actually liking.



Feature:
A Soldier Sent to Travel on a Important Eran, Discovering new place's Fighting for people in need
doing side quests, Discover new items new weapons, Fighting for rewards Earning trophy's From City to city
Earning a reputation Citizens starting to trust you. Earning tokens Bronze,silver,Gold or even platinum. to
start up side quests and you're main quest. As you fight saving others lives become the hero everyone has been waiting for
clean up the world or manipulating the mind of others to save you're own life
Disappointing the ones who cared for there loved ones by crushing them with your hands taking there soul away. decide
your path and journey the lands as you stand by your Decisions.


The Tutorial Demo is done,
This is going to be hopefully better then the other games i have been working on..
i have worked on this map for quite a very long time to make it playable for everyone.
Please report any bugs. or lags




Demos:

Demo Four: Released in February 18th. 2010
Fixes. And adds
Main menu Added.
Character Customization Added.
Spell checking Fixed.
Less Bandits Fixed.
Quest Journal Added.
Doors Fixed
Ferrow Conversation: Fixed
Gelbo Shortblade drop Fixed.
Damage's Fixed
player Death Reloading, New game, Quit Added.
Health Damage 40 dmg points Fixed. no low health after going through maze.
More Soon.

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Completed Demo: |
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Demo Three:
Added more bandits
Fixed "bandits revive"
Added 2 new bosses
2 new sidequests "Sindark blade quest, Insane mage Quest"
1 New rare sword
1 New common sword
Enjoy!

Screen shots
The maze
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Credits:
Ammohead213- Helping me with some good point of views
Serrafina- Resource Site
Ixayou- Resources Site
MIV- Resource Site
Metomunc- Resource Site
Qothegreat- Resource site
Armyoffone- Resource site
Lucifend- Resource site

Demo:
http://www.engine001.com/games/FinalProof_948.htm
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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby Stephen Chapman » Sun Dec 13, 2009 4:35 am

Looks pretty good. All except one minor detail. That log in the third screen doesn't belong ;)

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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby Raisrviln » Sun Dec 13, 2009 4:38 am

aww okay.. i made that poor little log. but i new it didn't fit in some how X.X

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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby Mike » Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:13 pm

Hehe, that is mildly funny, but yeah, map work and HUD is quite nice :D.

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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby haraldx » Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:17 pm

well the log over there looks more like anime style or something like that. really doesn't fit there. anything else looks quite nice.

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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby RPGking » Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:38 pm

About time some makes some good map consrtuction! Your maps are crafted nicely but some resources clash, which is okay I guess. Nice work. Will we be seeing more map detail including some tall grass possibly.

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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby Scaveleon » Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:42 pm

*** You picked up a Banana. ***

WOO! :D

Regarding the "plot", it's not reall a plot. It's more a listing of features. A plot is a story, involves certain characters/places/objects, which often gives a motive for playing, or the character in the game a motive to do something. The latter being more common.

Anything else, looks good. Personally, I don't care about the graphic clashes. It doesn't bother me much.
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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby Raisrviln » Sun Dec 13, 2009 2:43 pm

yea i know.

but before i put a real story in for it im getting all the maps completed first and all the sidequests put in then ill be working on the main quest you're
suppose to be doing.
im working on the choices as i make every sidequests, where you can be evil or good. hehe alot of work to do i believe ^.^
but the tutorial map is going to be alot bigger with alittle more quests before i start working on more maps :)

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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby manomomma » Mon Dec 14, 2009 11:11 am

Not sure if someone said this but some stuff doesn't clash like the log on the ground and the stones but I love the way you made the place small and comfortable I noticed that people make large rooms with one table and a few other things but you cramped it all in making perfect map! I love it! 7.5 game! -0.5 for lacking the "clash" ;)
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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby Gamerdude » Mon Dec 14, 2009 9:10 pm

You took away 0.5 points because his resources don't clash? Clashing is bad, it means they don't fit with each other. I think the word you're looking for is maybe mesh. Or match. ;)

Anyway, as previously stated, those are very detailed, eccentric maps. I look forward to playing your game. :)
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Re: Fallen Proof

Postby Raisrviln » Tue Dec 15, 2009 2:18 am

thanks, yea yea i learned my lesson putting a log there i lost 0.05! darn! :lol:

ill be putting up a the same screen-shot with no log! pretend like it never happened. :roll:

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Re: Fallen Proof "New Screenshots" "Demo 2 out"

Postby haraldx » Fri Dec 18, 2009 6:39 am

Woot demo 2 out, looks more detailed then ever.

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Re: Fallen Proof "Bug's Fixed" "Demo 3.0 out"

Postby Raisrviln » Sat Dec 19, 2009 2:29 am

demo 2 was abit sloppy i forgot to add the bandits so i spent alot of time making 2 new sidequests and alot of bandits finally made them able to revive :p so you can kill them over and over :lol:

hope everyone likes demo v3 just report any bugs that would be great :D
i have to say this turned out alot better then criminstance "my old game" since it was my first try :lol:

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Re: Fallen Proof "Bug's Fixed" "Demo 3.0 out"

Postby haraldx » Sat Dec 19, 2009 6:10 am

Downloading Demo v.3 now. will edit this post to comment the game.

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Re: Fallen Proof "Bug's Fixed" "Demo 3.0 out"

Postby Stephen Chapman » Sat Dec 19, 2009 6:18 am

I downloaded this game and decided to list the negative aspects of it for you. This is so you can improve on your mistakes and fix any bugs I pointed out, so please do not take it the wrong way, as I am trying to assist you.
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-No real introduction to the game. Perhaps a main menu or a short story?
-Doors to the first house don't open until you back away from them (try opening them the other direction)
-You should maybe limit the amount of conversation Ferrow Delonazo has with you
-The trigger that tells you "the rain clears up" has not been set to a Once Branch, therefore it repeats if you walk over it
-Gelbo drops a Shortblade when you defeat him. Is that supposed to happen?
-When you try to exit out of the second house to the right and the guards stop you and mention someone named Belriq, I wouldn't have a clue who this person is.
-There are possible "too many" bandits and they all hit 0's on me. Maybe you should just have a few battles rather than constant grinding.
-There is no Party Death script. Maybe you should add this in so that players can easily select the option to reload their game.
-After you finish the Bandit killing quest and collect your reward, if you retalk to the quest-giver, he asks if "you have the platinum coin yet" when the quest is already over.
-For some strange reason, after the house after the maze, my health would be decreased by large amounts for no apparent reason.
-Try naming your NPCs. I spent a lot of time looking for Barnalexius
-After the quest in the cave, I had no idea what to do next. In this case, I would learn how to make a Quest Journal so I know what I am doing.
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After playing this demo, I rate it 3/10. There is still a lot of progress, so my rating will indeed change. Looking forward to seeing a finished result.

-Stephen Chapman

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Re: Fallen Proof "Bug's Fixed" "Demo 3.0 out"

Postby Raisrviln » Sat Dec 19, 2009 6:38 am

thank you for list of things :)

ill work on those things.

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Re: Fallen Proof "Bug's Fixed" "Demo 3.0 out"

Postby Stephen Chapman » Sat Dec 19, 2009 7:07 am

Not a problem. Glad I can help. Oh and one more thing to add to that list:
-Spelling

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Re: Fallen Proof "Bug's Fixed" "Demo 3.0 out"

Postby haraldx » Sat Dec 19, 2009 12:50 pm

there are totally no once branches. also while message boxes are showing up you should pause the game or make yourself in the enemies team so they don't attack you while you are reading, when the messages are over just turn your team back.

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Re: Fallen Proof "Bug's Fixed" "Demo 3.0 out"

Postby Raisrviln » Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:46 pm

yes sir.


Edit:

i will repost a new version after i have completed every one of those tasks, the spelling was a bit sloppy me bad :roll:

and the enemy thing probably be best instead of turning the bandits bad :lol:

thank you guys this will help me with me game alot more i thank you

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Re: Fallen Proof "Bug's Fixed" "Demo 3.0 out"

Postby Partysofa » Sat Dec 19, 2009 9:40 pm

I'll download later, it looks very good :D
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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby Raisrviln » Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:02 am

yea sorry about all that about the once branches i forgot to add some to alot of things i was more busy working on my maps instead of paying attention what really needs to be fixed me apologizes. but still its my second game still kinda confused how to do alot of things but i am still geting better everyday. once again! thank you everyone for checking it all up for me and telling my mistakes it helped me alot.

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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby haraldx » Wed Dec 23, 2009 5:46 am

It's okay (MIV might say it isn't). We all have our first time. Then we just get used to the stuff and start acting like a pro.

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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby Raisrviln » Wed Dec 23, 2009 6:51 am

i can handle MIV critics and hes pretty cool but everyone makes mistakes pro or not :lol:

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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby coffeennicotine » Wed Dec 23, 2009 7:08 am

I like your choice of tile-sets for this game; along with the map layout. Good maps aren't as easy to make as they seem, and these are good.

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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby Fizi » Wed Dec 23, 2009 8:27 am

that game was a good one... honest!!! ;)
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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby Raisrviln » Wed Dec 23, 2009 8:19 pm

thank yea mates. :)

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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby Ammohead » Mon Dec 28, 2009 1:56 am

Ah my bad, I enjoyed this game, cant wait for the next demo. :D
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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby Raisrviln » Wed Dec 30, 2009 2:09 am

thanks matey. :)

some complications going on but its worth the wait i hope :)

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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby MIV » Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:51 am

Exactly what kind of complications are you experiencing?
Also, are there any previews of the characters you plan to use? The default is fine, but preferably try to give it more of a shadow if you want to use it to fit in with the shading used in the environment objects.
Oh, and I'm fine with it. Mildly fine, but still fine. :D
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Re: Fallen Proof "Demo 4.0 Coming_soon"

Postby Raisrviln » Wed Dec 30, 2009 4:52 pm

MIV your back!! yay :D how was japan. okay tell me later.

right now i am working on choices on it. where you can be good or bad. that's my problem right now. a real headache to work on acualy.
since i have to refix the quests and make them have a choice of the sides.


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