A poem I just made!

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Rico
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A poem I just made!

Postby Rico » Mon Sep 27, 2010 4:41 pm

What does it mean to be human?

What does it mean to be a human?
A pink, furless ape,
With dominance of the world,
With everything on a plate.

Leading with our intelligence,
Expanding with the power of our minds,
Trapped on a blue rock,
Bringing destruction to our kind.

With the ability to be beautiful,
And the power to destroy,
With Earth's fate in our hands,
We abuse it like a toy.

We all want to be individual,
But we crave to conform,
Examining each other,
Trying to act out the norm.

We are brilliant by ourselves,
But together we are dumb,
Emotions take us over,
And we try to have some fun.

Society is a square,
And if anyone steps out of line,
They'll be labelled outcast,
For the rest of time.

So what does it mean to be human?
Enslaved by our kind,
Trapped for eternity,
Because of the power of our mind.

Rico, 2010/ 21:30 pm.
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Re: A poem I just made!

Postby JilutheFang » Mon Sep 27, 2010 5:22 pm

Pretty much sums up the thoughs I had the whole day. :D
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Re: A poem I just made!

Postby Rico » Mon Sep 27, 2010 6:21 pm

Thanks, it's something I have on my mind alot. ;)
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Re: A poem I just made!

Postby Ixayou » Tue Sep 28, 2010 5:58 pm

Been thinking the exact same thing lately.
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Re: A poem I just made!

Postby patatoface » Tue Sep 28, 2010 9:00 pm

nice poem i think you are a good poet, i can't really think of what else to say.

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Re: A poem I just made!

Postby Scaveleon » Wed Sep 29, 2010 5:42 am

Very philosophical, yet spot on with points and rhymes. Great work.
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Re: A poem I just made!

Postby Rico » Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:57 am

Thanks :D poetry isn't really my thing usually. :D
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Re: A poem I just made!

Postby Tydome » Wed Sep 29, 2010 9:23 pm

Rico wrote:Thanks :D poetry isn't really my thing usually. :D


Poetry is everyones thing.

Nice poem mate
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Re: A poem I just made!

Postby Indiana 266 » Thu Sep 30, 2010 1:01 am

Yeah nice Rico.
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